How to Use a Digital Camera

by Hanna
(Hawaii)

First, to open the camera, you need to press the power button on the top of the camera.

Then, find a good picture to take.

After that, press the big rounded button to take the picture.

Finally, to view the picture that you took, pull down the little lever to view the picture.

Hanna! Great job.

The only thing I added was "you need to" in the first sentence. Other than that you didn't make any mistakes. Wonderful!

My only suggestion would be to add more details. Imagine that you are going to take a picture. Try to describe each and every step necessary to take a picture. Assume that you are talking to someone who has never used a camera before.

If you like you could try adding more details to your lesson and then post it below as a comment. (I will correct that as well). Keep up the great work.

Diana

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