Many students are preparing to take their IELT exam and want to practice the essay portion before hand. This week, for the writing course, I decided to dedicate our time to preparing for your exam.
Below is the essay question that I'd like you to answer. Make sure to brainstorm (think about your answer) first. Organize your ideas on paper and make sure to include an introduction, a body paragraph and a conclusion.
I will edit your paper, but I also invite everyone to leave comments and suggestions to eachother. This will create a more forum like feel to the writing course and you will also learn more as you interact with one another. Be creative and have fun!
Click below to see my revision of the essay and to see what other students have written...
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