Once upon a Princess

by keara
(parma,ohio,usa)

once there was a little girl name Sarahand her father was dating a princess from sugar mountain and sarah was so unhappy because she thought that her father and the princess from sugar mountin and one day her and sarah's father want to her castle to meet her the king of sugar moutin and her father thought she had a great person and sarah's dad asked the princess if she would marry her.


But, the princess did not say anything but her father said yes for her because the princess told her dad to say it for her. Then sarah became a princess because her fahter became the next king with his wife and his dauther.
THE END

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Jun 09, 2009
Once upon a Princess
by: Majid

once UPON A TIME, there was a little girl CALLED Sarahand. Her father was GOING TO datE a princess from sugar mountain. SHE was so unhappy because she thought that her father and the princess from sugar mountAin WOULD MARRY AND SHE WOULD BE LEFT ALONE. One day, SHE ALONG WITH HER father, WENT to her castle to meet her. The king of sugar mountAin and her father thought she WAS a great person and HE asked the princess if she would marry her.

The princess did not say anything but her father said yes for her because the princess HAD ALREADY told HIM to say it for her(SHE HAD ALREADY TOLD HIM TO DO SO). Then Sarah became a princess, TOO, because HER FATHER WAS THE FUTURE KING (OR her father WAS GOING TO BE the FUTURE king OF THE LAND.

Jun 08, 2009
Once upon princess
by: Pam

Once there were a little girl named Sarah. Her father was dating to the princess of the Sugar Mountain. Sarah was so unhappy, because she knew that her father and the princess were in love. One day the princess invited Sarah's father to the castle to meet her father the King.

The King knew immediately that Sarah's father was a great man, and Sarah's father ask to the princess if she wanted to marry him. The princess did not say anything but her father, the king, accepted in the name of her on her behalf. Years later Sarah became a princess because when the king died Sarah's father became the new king next to his wife and his daughter.

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