Past Continuous: Beautiful San Diego

by Miya
(St. Louis)

We went to San Diego. This is That was the second time I went there. I liked it so very much. We took an airplane. While on the plane, I was looking down watching the world from my window. I saw something view which lookeds like Great the Grand Canyon with yellowish cliffs and a stream in between. The hotel was nice. It is was close to Mission Bay. The Weather was O.K. The sun was shining all day long. It was still chilly though. I liked the city. I like the southern view landscape with beautiful Palm trees. I just love that city and would like to visit go back to visit again soon.

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Great work! I'd like you to add the corrections I added and also try to use the past continuous three more times. I added one regarding the weather. Try to be creative. Make a conscious effort to use the past continuous so that you can become more comfortable with it.

Examples:

As I watched the movie, people were sleeping all around me.
As I ate my lunch, the boy beside me was watching a movie.

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