Past Continuous: My Trip to Guadalara

I was on vacationes for about one month in Mexico. Well, my family en and I traveled in by car. We were very happy. When we arrived in to Guadalara we were tired because we were had been driving for about 29 hours without rest stopping. My parents were weitting waiting for us when we arrived, with somemthing to eat. When I saw to my parents, I was very happy and could that night I was able to sleep for a lot long time.

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Hello,

I don't know your name because you left that part blank but I have edited this story and it is very good. You use the past continuous well and are able to express your ideas well. Next time, try to add more details. Be descriptive.

What type of car were you driving?
What was the weather like?
What did you do to pass the time while in the car?
What were your parents wearing when you arrived?
What did they prepare for you to eat?

Ask lots of questions and be detailed. Then you will start to expand your vocabulary more and more!

Great work!
- Diana