Past Continuous: My Trip to South Africa, Cape Town
by Berhanu
(Addis Ababa, Ethiopia)
Two months a ago, I have been travelled went to Cape Town, S.A.
I travelled went with my colleagues. There were three of us we were three. We travelled by took a plane there. When we live left Addis, it was about 8 o'clock in the morning. The flight took lasted around six hours.
I have been travelled to some African countries before; like Kenya, Ghana, and Burkina Faso. South Africa is a different country from the others countries. I have seen many pleasant places in South Africa. The weather there is also some how it is some what comfortable; it is some sometimes cold and sometimes hot some times.
Hi Berhanu,
I'm so glad that you are using the website to it's full potential. Doing many of the writing assignments and repeating them is going to really improve your English writing skills. :)
Great work on this one! The only thing missing is the past continuous. The exercise is focusing on using this grammar point.
What I suggest you do is to try to add some past continuous sentences to your story. Just post your updated story as a comment (see below).
That way you can correct your mistakes and try to use the past continuous as well.
Have a great day!
Diana
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