Past Continuous: New Years Vacation
by Jane Yang
(Guangzhou city,Guangdong province,China)
My new years vacation was from the 22nd
th of Jan. to the 4th of Feb.
my whole vacation. I
the new house everyday, because it was a
I like the new house, because it's so much
old house. The best thing
that our whole family
can could stay be
had share a
Hi Jane Yang, I corrected your story and I'd like you to look at the grammar explination again, about the past continuous.
Generally you will use the simple past more frequently. Try to write your story in the simple past and then using the rules, add some sentences in the past continuous.
Keep up the good work.
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