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Past Continuous: Trip to Atlanta

by Ruzan
(Yerevan,Armenia)

I like to spend my vacations with my family. I spent my last vacation ~~I've spend~~ with my daughter. She is a student at OSU, USA. I was planning our trip to Atlanta, GA while she passed her final exams. ~~We have had been informed from~~ Our friends told us, that the weather is perfect in Atlanta; the sun is shines all day, while the weather in Ohio is really cold.

We ~~have~~ had decided to fly by airplane and we were excited about our vacation. We got on our plane and were enjoying our flight, while our friends came to the airport to ~~make a hearty~~ welcome us.

We ~~were spending~~ had a really great time there. They ~~were taking~~ took us in to many interesting places. We ~~have~~ visited to the Georgia aquarium and the “Titanic" museum (which is ~~unique~~ the only Titanic museum in the world. We also ~~have been on~~ went up the CNN center. It was a wonderful vacation!

Hi Ruzan,

I edited your assignment so quickly that I didn't leave a comment! So here we go, you write very well! You also use the past continuous naturally and effectively. Great job!

I am also glad to see that you took the time to review and correct your work! Excellent work Ruzan! I'm looking forward to your next story or assignment! -Diana

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May 27, 2009

First time at the Eiffel tower
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Last month, I visited Paris for 5 days with my boyfriend Van. We chose to take a train instead of flying because we haden't been travelling by train abroad. We had a great time on the train while travelling to Paris.

When we got to Paris it was too early to check in to our hotel. So we made our way to the Eiffel tower before checking in even though going up the tower was on the 4th day of our schedule.

The weather was incredible and we decided to hang around by the tower. We both loved lying down in the park by the Eiffle tower. While we were lying down we could see the people who were going up and down the tower.

With my binoculars I could see them clearly. Some were taking the stairs and some were in the lifts. We took so many nice pictures with the the Eiffle tower in the background.

Van got an interesting picture which looks like he was hugging the tower. We also managed to enjoy our delicious packed lunch when we were sitting in the park.

By the time we had had our lunch, it was time to check in. So we reluctantly left to continue to our hotel by metro.

That was the very first experience yet unforgettable.

Mar 18, 2009

Trip to Atlanta
by: Ruzan

I like to spend my vacations with my family. I spent my last vacation with my daughter. She is a student at OSU, USA. I was planning our trip to Atlanta, GA while she passed her final exams. Our friends told us, that the weather is perfect in Atlanta; the sun shines all day, while the weather in Ohio is really cold.
We had decided to fly by airplane and were excited about our vacation. We got on our plane and were enjoying our flight, while our friends came to welcome us.

We had a really great time there. They took us to many interesting places. We have visited the Georgia aquarium and the ?Titanic" museum (which is the only Titanic museum in the world). We also went up the CNN center. It was a wonderful vacation!

Excellent work Ruzan!!! -Diana

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