Past Continuous: Trip to Atlanta
I like to spend my vacations with my family. I spent my last vacation
I've spend with my daughter. She is a student at OSU, USA. I was planning our trip to Atlanta, GA while she passed her final exams. We have had been informed from Our friends told us, that the weather is perfect in Atlanta; the sun is shines all day, while the weather in Ohio is really cold.
decided to fly by airplane and we were excited about our vacation. We got on our plane and
were enjoying our flight, while our friends ca
me to the
make a hearty
were spending had
a really great time there. They
were taking took
to many interesting places. We
Georgia aquarium and the
“Titanic" museum (which is
unique the only Titanic museum
in the world. We also
have been on went up the
CNN center. It was a wonderful vacation!
I edited your assignment so quickly that I didn't leave a comment! So here we go, you write very well! You also use the past continuous naturally and effectively. Great job!
I am also glad to see that you took the time to review and correct your work! Excellent work Ruzan! I'm looking forward to your next story or assignment! -Diana
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