Past Continuous: Trip with my Boyfriend

by Rossete

It was a very beautiful day. So beautiful that I had never realized how wonderful life could be, until I took a that trip with my boyfriend in such a lovely weather.

We met up in front of the train station. We went to the convenient convenience store to get some snacks for us andthen we took the train to e-lan. It is a place where We have always wanted to go there and finally, we have had enough time to go there. The weather was so hot, but I dont didn't mind.

All that mattered to me was , i only care that I could be with him and enjoy the day with him. It was so great!

Hi Rossete,

Your story is very good. I made some corrections for you. The only issue is that you didn't use the past continuous. If you like you could review your story and try to add the past continuous a couple times. Just post your updated story as a comment below.

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