Past Continuous: Unforgettable tour

by Neel
(Bhopal,MP,India)

<i>Horseback riding is great fun for all ages  </i>

Horseback riding is great fun for all ages



**Remember to capitalize the words that begin a sentence!**


We went on a tripto Kedarnath trip in April month. we were 8 member. There were 8 of us. It was an unforgettable trip. A trip of a lifetime. tour of my life. It was the best trip of my life. It's the best trip I have ever been on. I always tell everyone that they should go to Kedarnth at least once in their lives. It is a holy place. It is God's home.


We reached Kedarnath up to Kedarnath we reached by bus and once we arrived the kids in our group after that all young member went by horseback riding, the children by pittu (a man holding a child on his back)and my grand mother by palki ( four person people holding her)

Kedarnath is a hilly, snow-covered area. It is surrounded by huge hills. In April month it was so cold moreover and snow was falling that day. We didn't have had not enough wool blankets and we were worried about the children and my grandmother.

We started our journey in the morning and reached arrived in the evening. We stayed one night in Kedarnath. After taking having dinner we slept. The next day we woke up early in the morning. We were going to see the temple. It was really beautiful. The architecture of that temple is amazing. The temple is surrounded by three mountains which were covered by snow. It was a very beautiful thing to see. After seeing the temple we rode the bus in the evening. we enjoyed a lot the natural scenery a lot during our journey.

Hi Neel,
Great use of the past conditional. It sounds like you have a beautiful snowy trip to Kedarnath. There are a couple things that you need to work one.

1) Remember to capitalize the beginning of your sentences!
2) When you are speaking about things, remember to use the articles (the or a). For example: The mountains, the bus, the temple, a horse etc.

Keep up the good work and try the next assignment which will be on explaining situations.

Have a great day!
-Diana

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