Past Continuous: Unforgettable tour
Horseback riding is great fun for all ages
**Remember to capitalize the words that begin a sentence!** W
e went on a trip
we were 8 member
. There were 8 of us
It was an unforgettable trip. A trip of a lifetime. tour of my life
t was the best trip of my life. It's the best trip I have ever been on
. I always
tell everyone that they
should go to Kedarnth at least once in their lives
t is a holy
t is God's home.
We reached Kedarnath
up to Kedarnath we reached
by bus and once we arrived the kids in our group
after that all young member
riding, the children by pittu (a man holding a child on his back)and my grand mother by palki ( four
edarnath is a
area. It is surrounded by huge hills. In A
it was so cold
snow was falling that day. We didn't have
enough wool blankets and
we were worried about the children and my grandmother.
We started our journey in the
in the evening. We stayed one night in Kedarnath. After
dinner we slept. The
next day we wo
ke up early in the morning. We were going to see the temple. It was really beautiful. The
architecture of that temple is amazing
temple is surrounded by three mountains
covered by snow. It was a very beautiful thing to see.
After seeing the
temple we rode the bus in the evening. we enjoyed
a lot the
natural scenery a lot
during our journey.
Great use of the past conditional. It sounds like you have a beautiful snowy trip to Kedarnath. There are a couple things that you need to work one.
1) Remember to capitalize the beginning of your sentences!
2) When you are speaking about things, remember to use the articles (the or a). For example: The mountains, the bus, the temple, a horse etc.
Keep up the good work and try the next assignment which will be on explaining situations.
Have a great day!