Past Continuous: Vacation in the British Virgin Islands
British Virgin Islands
It was the summer of 2007. I was on a two month
s vacation from school and I had really wanted to go some where for a change. My mother suggested to be that I visit my aunt and cousins who are living live in the BVI. I was overjoyed that she would let me travel out of the country and I immediately began to make travel plans.
Within a weak I
was booking my ticket at the travel agency. I was leaving on the 30th of July, three days after my birthday.
The day was finally here; my ex-boyfriend took me to the airport and I
was on my way to the BVI. The flight was tiresome and it took eight hours
to the BVI there
. My aunt and my cousin Jaison
there waiting for me
It wasn't a long drive from the airport to where they lived. A
did when I
got there, was have dinner and retire/go
to bed, since everyone else had to work the next morning.The
next day was wonderful; it was sunny but windy and one of my cousins
took the day off and
took me sight seeing.
For the first time in my life had i ever I had never seen
such beautiful beaches and
magneficient houses up steep hills in my entire life
What a wonderful story! You write extremly well! There were just a couple small mistakes, like using a capital "I" and some typos. Great work. I'm looking forward to reading your next story!
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