PIF: Effect of Transportation

by soleman
(libya)


These machines are so important for us. I mean cars, buses and the others kinds of transportation. But, at the same time they are also dangerous for us.


First of all more and more of us they can't move to their works and they can't contact with the others we can't also go far and far only by these things

Secondly as we know all kind of engines makes smoke and this kind of smoke it's not healthy and dangerous for us and the whole the planet.

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Aug 04, 2009
This is my opinion!
by: Trang

These 'machines' are so important to us. I mean cars, buses and all other kinds of transportation. However, at the same time they are also dangerous for us.

First of all, more and more of us can't go to work or contact others and also go father only because of these things.

Secondly, as we know, almost all kinds of engines produce smoke and this is dangerous for us and the whole planet.

Jul 20, 2009
Effect of Transportation
by: Majid

These machines are so important for us. I mean cars, buses and the others kinds(other kinds) of transportation. But, at the same time they are also dangerous for us.

First of all, more and more of us they(...) can't move to their(our) jobs and they(we) can't contact with the others(with others) we can't also go far and far(go far and farther) only by these things.

Secondly as we know, all kind of engines makes smoke and this kind of smoke(this smoke is dangerous for us ) it's not healthy and dangerous for us and the whole the planet (the whole planet).

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