PIF: Please proofread my cover letter

by Betty Wong
(Macao)

February 8th, 2009

Dear HR Manager:

Office Assistant

It is very kind of you to open this position to us. I would like to apply for it.

My name is Betty Wong. I was born in Macao and graduated in Forestry in National Taiwan University this year.

During my school days, I have taken many part-time jobs such as office assistant in National Taiwan University, sales in gift shop of National Yellowstone Park, meat shop and clothes shop, tutor.

Thanks to my university which offered and gave me lots of experience in office assistant. My work duty is to arrange in discussion between professors included other universities and solve problems might happen.

Furthermore, I joined Travel & Work which held by US government in Taiwan. I was appreciated to the owner of Yellowstone Park who came to Taiwan for giving the opportunity to interview and offer a job in gift shop to me. It allowed me to learn more and faster in how to have a good relationship with customers and workmates.

I am a outgoing always with a smile, talkative, good listening and active person. I also like to meet something new and work with others.

I am sure I have the right qualification you are looking for. Thank you for your kind attention. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes,
Betty Wong