The Robbery

by reasrhgeshjte
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It was the week before mum's birthday. Stephen and Christen decided to go shopping for a present.They walked past Mr Hue's jewellery shop. All of a sudden, they heard a dreadful noise. Two men were running quikly from the shop. They had broke the window with a brick and had took poketfuls of jewellery.


Away they ran to a blue car. Christen and Stephan ran to a nearby telephone booth. She rung the police emergency number. “There's been a robbery”,she panted, “The car's number is 2336576” shouted Stephan. Within minutes the police were there. The criminals were caught and taken away. “Thank you very much” said the policeman cheerfully. “I'd like to reward these children” said Mr Hue gratefully. The children skipped home. What a surprise they had for mum!

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May 25, 2009
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by: Anonymous

It was the week before Mum's birthday. Stephen and Christen decided to go shopping for a present. They walked past Mr. Hue's jewelry shop. All of a sudden, they heard a dreadful noise. Two men ran quickly out of the shop. They had broken the window with a brick and had taken pocketfuls of jewelry.

Away they ran to a blue car. Christen and Stephan ran to a nearby telephone booth. She rang the police emergency number. "There's been a robbery", she panted, "The car's lisence plate number is 2336576?" shouted Stephan. Within minutes the police were there.

The criminals were caught and taken away. "Thank you very much" said the policeman cheerfully. "I'd like to reward these children," said Mr. Hue gratefully. The children skipped home. What a surprise they had for Mum!

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