by weer welar

My friends and I was were in mountant the mountains?, we don't didn't have any idea about the how to climbing. Also the weather was very bad, it has changed when we arrived, but it was a wonderful trip. I liked it.

Hi Weer Welar,
This is a great start. I'd like you to add more details to your story. Where did you and your friends stay? Was the hotel nice? What did you eat? What did you pack? Try to give more details so that you have more opportunities to use the past continuous tense in your writing. Keep up the good work.


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