Why I Study English

by Berhanu
(Addis Ababa,Ethiopia)

My name is Berhanu Adenew. I was born in on April 16 ,1981.

I was born in Ethiopia the in a place called Alamata, in northern part of the country. I am now 28 years old and I got married two months before ago.

I am a university student and a worker I am workign as well. I have dreams of having money(many?) degrees. I strongly am extremely interested to in improveing my English language skills; like writing, reading, listening and speaking. I hope and I am sure this website will help me more on this these needs.

The main reasons of struggling that I struggle to improve my language skills are the following: first the places that I am working need require all the above skills and in addition to this, it also helps me my study in the at university.

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Hi Berhanu and welcome to Helping You Learn English.com. I edited your writing and you write very well.

Here are a couple of your common mistakes;

1) Always capitalize "I"...I love...I talk...I study. It is always a capital.

2) Always capitalize the first word of a sentence.

3) We say on a date. I was born on November 22, 1982.

4) Make sure your demonstratives are correct. This for singular and these for plural. For a quick review of demonstratives click here.

5) We say at university without the.

I hope that you enjoy the website. Remember, the website will only help you, as much as you let it. If you use it...it will help you. The more you use it...the more it will help you. :)

Have a wonderful Day!
Diana

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