An Exciting Trip to Florida

by Sassy
(California)

I have 2 sisters living in Florida that I always wanted to see, since we don't see haven’t seen each other for the past 6 years.

My oldest sister invited me to visit them on in December for Christmas with all my kids, so I decided to take that invitation as the an opportunity to meet them again and have a good times.

Family is the most important thing for me. My kids were so excited to meet my family, they didn't really know them, but just except for in pictures. We Flought flew by plane twenty days before Christmas. When we got there we were so exited that we gave us my family hugs and kisses full of happiness.

I spected expected the weather to be hot, but it always was cold the entire time we were there, even more so than in the state where that I'm living. I had a good times though. We visited a very popular place called Bush Gardens where we got had a lot of fun. That place looked most a lot like Disneyland.

I also visited some lakes where we were fishing and at the same time having picnics. Time flought flew by and Christmas arrived. We celebrated that day as never before, we were so happy opening Christmas presents and celebrating at the same time two birthdays at the same time, my nephew's and my daughter's birthday.

Our trip to Florida really was a very exciting experience. I enjoyed the company of my lovely sisters and all their kids and also enjoyed visiting places that I never thought they existed. Now, I’m looking forward to visiting my sisters again this coming Christmast.


Hi Sassy,

Great work! What a wonderful story. It sounds like you and your entire family had a great Christmas together. I live in Spain and I went home for Christmas last year. I go home every summer but it had been a while since I had been home for Christmas, almost three years. I'm glad that you were able to spend that time with your family.

In terms of your writing, you write very well. I changed a couple mistakes with grammar and word choice but in general, very well done. Keep up the great work.

Have a super day Sassy!

Diana



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