An Unhappy Accident
by Raluca Daniela
Shopping Bag Thief
mr. policeman officer, pleasehelp me! I must report a robbery! I was walking on the Avenue 15th street no 15 when I saw I nice red dress in the showcase of the Steilmann shop.
Abviously I stopped. You know that I am a huge fan of shopping fan and I just cannot pass through without looking or sometimes even buying. Actually, I had bought a n very expensive Zara dress from Zara just fifteen minutes before that this unfortunate accident happend. Anyway, As I was saying, I was admiring the dresses in that Steilmann dress and when suddenly I felt a someone grasp on my arm. As you can imagine, I got became very confused and scared in at the same time. I turned away quickly and I got shocked was stunned for 2 seconds: a short man, with a dubious look, was actually grabbing my bag! Can you imagine? He was robbing stealing my bag with my precious-just-bought Zara dress from Zara!
Ohh my God, I thought I would faint. But in the next second I started beating him
hardly with the magazine that I was holding in my other hand. I was so scared and frightened, because he had strongly grabbed my hand with so much force and had started rudely ripping my shirt. I can still feel my hand aching me. My hand still hurts!
Can you please help me? I want my bag back. With that fancy dress I had in it. I also lost my identity card ana my wallet too. Please, I
leave live near the center, on the at number 12, Future st r. no 12. I leave you Here is my entire address and when you find that horrible thief, could you could call me immediately on at this number? Catch that man, he is a real danger on our streets!
Raluca!!! Excellent work!
You had me smiling the whole time. Not because the woman had been robbed but by how creative and descriptive your assignment is. I LOVE IT! You really set an example for everyone else here. I changed a couple things (word placement, spelling and a bit of grammar) BUT in general I must congratulate you. What a great job!
Also, THANK YOU for submitting the picture too. It makes your assignment very visually pleasing. I encourage everyone to include a picture with your assignments. :)
Keep you the great work Raluca.