English is More and More Important

by Joyce
(Shenzhen,China)

Shenzhen, my hometown

Shenzhen, my hometown

English is more and more important in Shenzhen. Shenzhen is a new, modern city in the South of China. It's next to Hong Kong and not very big but it is beautiful. Many foreigners come here for business but in 2011, the Summer Universiade will be held in here. If you speak very good English, you can get a well-paid job easily.


There are thousands of English training centers here. Many young people go to those centers to learn and improve their English after work. Many parents also send their children after school or on weekends. We want our next generations to learn English in order to perfect their lives.
Great job Joyce. I must say that you write extremely well. Not many mistakes at all. I'd like you to push yourself a little and try to write more. Add more details and opinions. I'd love to see you write outside your comfort level. I also love the picture. Shenzhen is a beautiful city. I look forward to your next story Joyce!

Diana



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