How to rewrite a sentence without using "I"
Here is the sentence that I need to rewrite, without using "I". How can I do this and still have a grammatically correct sentence?
Once completion of these classes, I continued to pursue in receiving a certification. Diana's suggestion:
Upon completion of these classes, my continued pursuit of certification followed.I must say though, that it sounds more natural using "I".
Is this sentence being used in a resume or formal document?
This is how I would rewrite the sentence but maybe others will suggest more ways to write it.
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