Rupam (Me)

by Rupam
(India)

Hi I am rupam.i am a very good boy.i usually always try to improve my grammar skills through various fields of improvisation.its such a great way of improving my grammar skill.


my mother always told me that a good spoken language increases the confidence level of a person.with this i always tries to improve language. my father is such s nice person. he is a spiritual person.

the meaning of a spiritual person according to him is that a person which is having a spirit in himself is known as spiritual person.

Thnx Diana, now i am going to check and correct my mistakes if happen.

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Sep 12, 2009
cheerful and knowledge seeker
by: Rupam Arora

Hi Guys
I study in class 5th. I like to explore life in my own way. I don't stop questionning till i reach the level of my satisfaction.

My hobbies are-- music, playing drum and tabla, playing cricket and lawm tennis, cracking jokes and dancing with friends and at last searching on internet.

I want to progress in life so that i can help me, my family and offer my thanks to God by giving back to society in form of charity.

Rupam The Great Indian

May 28, 2009
About corrections
by: Pam

Hi Diana,
You were clear enough in your explanation; I made a mistake in my previous comment. For me to make a correction is like raising my hand in class and that was always difficult for me. Thanks a lot for your understanding.
Pam
No worries at all. I love that you are participating more and loosing your fear of correcting. I think this will help you a great deal! All the best. -Diana

May 28, 2009
About corrections
by: Pam

Thanks Diana. At the beginning, I was a little shy to correct, but now that I am sure you will verify what I am doing, I feel more confident to do it.
Hi Pam, I tried to make that clear in explaining the whole idea of "Paying it forward" but maybe I didn't make myself clear enough. I'd like people to try and correct one another and then once you provide corrections, I will look at your corrections to ensure that everything is ok. :) Basically it is two checks for the price of one. :)

May 27, 2009
Rupam
by: Pam

Hi. My name is I am Rupam. I am a very good boy and usually I am trying try to improve my grammar skills through various fields of improvisation. It is such a great way of improving my grammar skills.

My mother always is telling tells me that good spoken language speaking skills increases the confidence level of a person. With this advice, I always try to improve my language. My father is such a nice person; he is a spiritual person.

The meaning of a spiritual person, according to him, is that a person which is having a spirit in himself contains a spirit within himself.

Thanks Diana. Now I am going to check and correct my mistakes.
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Hi Rupam, I tried my best in my observations. I am in my learning process too and, it is possible that there are other mistakes.
Hi Rupam and Pam. Great work! I would especially like to congratulate you Pam. Thank you so much for taking the time to help someone else with their writing. I know that it will help you too! I wish that everyone could be as generous and giving as you. :) Have a wonderful day! - Diana ps: I made a couple more correction in bold but you did a great job!

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